That's a great poem of love! Keep it up.

Awww this is so adorable!!
Amazing!!
You are SOO Talented!!
I wish I had your writing ability
mwah I loved it
love from
kaila
5/5/

I have to say that I love the title . It really grabs you`r attention . Overall, I like the poem . It wasn`t overly ah`mazing but it really depicted the strong feelings being expressed through this poem . I wouldn`t change a thing . [:
..__MiNDYY

Aweeeh! Very cute. I love how you can write so many love poems and each one is still so different than the others. You had a great start to this poem as well as a strong ending, so kudos on that..this was all in all a really good poem. I loved it. (:

5.5
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I though that it was sweet. The word choice was great and the flow was very nice. I gave it a 5/5.

That was very goodd.. keep up the good word..

Wow, truly touching. I loved the pure romance to this piece. The imagery was fantastic, obviously about a truly passionate love. Well done, Greta.

Wow I really liked this poem Joe. I think that my favorite thing about it was that the lines didn't rhyme. While I love rhymed poems I think that sometimes it takes away from the strength of the message and this message was sure powerful. When I first read the title I thought that it was going to be about death, or sadness I didnt expect a love poem. Turned my idea of the title completly around, well done. The only thing that I would change is I would get rid of all of the I's you's My's etc and so forth. Reading them over and over sort of take away from the poem's beauty. Nice write though.