A Hope Already Dead.

by Sarah Ann   May 17, 2007


You love me, break me, leave me
Leave me waiting, weeping, lost
Blood is flowing, I digress
In this silly, hopeless mess
Of surface brewing, deferred dreams
Tearing faster at the seams
Funnel clouds, submerge the trees
Weakness spreads like a disease
Where the answers do not stay,
No one sees the world decay,
Between a screen of spun glass threads
And a hope already dead.

[A poem with mixed feelings and meaning. Comment and I will return the favor.]

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxxBeenThereRockedThatxxX

    Mixed feelings is absolutely right to describe this one....very good!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love this...
    It is beautifully written, very powerful and hardhitting, word choice is a joy to read and the flow is flawless throughout.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lucifers lair

    Beautiful poem. You shouldn't write poems with deep meaning. I just might figure you out. great job

  • 17 years ago

    by ShayHope

    I can understand this poem... but it has alot of effect in the meanings. It's very good, but is confusing in a way, but i understand what it means. Very good.

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