WOW! I didn't even want to read this because of the title and I knew it would have something to do with self harm, but I am glad I never judged this poem by the title. The lines in the stanzas are very short, yet have the same amount of depth and emotion to them as a longer stanza could. It wasn't as cliched as some cutting poetry, and you expressed your feelings in a mature manner, not just stating the blood and the razorblade, but adding a story in as well. Anyways, this was a really good poem, Darling; keep it up! =]]

5.5

I usually do not like the self harm poetry. I had to search for a poem of yours that I hadn't already commented on and came across this one. I am so glad now that I read it. I enjoyed it tremendously and this was a pleasure to read. You have so much talent that I am constantly left in awe of it. Wonderful Job,

Kay