What a beautiful piece you have penned. Your imagery and word choices are amazing. You really have so much talent. You seem to be able to write about anything.

Our spirits becoming one, brilliantly
luminous is their glow.
Just a word from your soft lips
I shall make it so.

This stanza is really beautiful. I can imagine being one with my husbands spirit when my time comes. Excellent write.
Love Cindy

Great poem. It's a masterpiece.
I liked this lines:

Great wings of golden feathers
forged of metal not foul.
Mystifying and marvelously magical
I dare not ask how.

Good work! 5/5.

Ray