Awwww tahts so sweet!! u need to add more to the ending though...like what happened once they met and everyhting. but what u have is really good

xo kisses xo

Hey that is one of the most sweetest poems ive ever read! I dont think you should add anything else..the ending is perfect coz it leaves a lil to the imagination. This poem was visual for me, it was pretty mad..I really really liked it. Keep up the amazing work! Xx Chrissie

This poem is so cute and i love how it tells a story, i really like this poem i think you are a great writter 5/5!