by Cyma Khan May 17, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Her eyes speaks her pain |
Api u bombing on peoples Heart! |
I love this poem :] |
Hmm, yes i have felt this way at stages in my life. Good work and great fluency. Greta xo |
by Roxy
Aww!! I agree with vanessa it may be simple but it sends a very strong message out!! Huni, I've heard that poems-and-quotes will be shut down or something. Just wanted to warn you just in case it does. I really don't want to lose touch with you because you are an amazing friend to me and I dont want that to go away. Add me to msn if you have one glamour_girl_emily@hotmail.com |
by Vanessa
Simple yet powerful, I really like this the emtion was deep and powerful, the word choice was excellent. 5/5 |