This poem is so true..
It was strongly worded, the flow was there, and for sure got you thinking (or adleast it did me)
Spectacular Read.
Well done,
Elainex

Very well said....a truth of all truths
5/5

God bless u

This piece is interesting and looks challanging. keep writing

I have done this type of piece from time to time and you did remarkablely well good job I enjoyed it a lot Plot121

Very nice. I have to admit, I've never seen a poem done on this idea. Great Job. Way to be out of the box. Even if your standing in the rain ;) You have talent, I have enjoyed reading your poems

5/5

Thanks for doing mine