Oh my gosh this is so kool. its kind of a mix of both a sad and a love poem. i love it and think its amazing good job. 5/5

Honestly, it was okay for me.
It wasn't great.
It kind of made me want to skim it.
I didn't find a rhythm to this poem.
With your format
It would've been better if you rhymed it.
It's not bad, I guess.
But it's not the best either.
Sorry to be so harsh.
If you want the 4/5
PM me.
I'll give it to you.
I don't want to lower your vote :]

Great poem i use to feel that way so i can relate sort of lol but i think everyone feels different about this kind of thing well good job on the poem i think you did a great job also thanks for the comment

keenan

Yup, this is so sweet, i bet you could really write a poem about anything that happend in your life, wherever you felt like it, and the poem would still be beautiful. i thought it was a miix of sad and love, so im not really sure which one.... sorry.
but 5/5
gabriella

The only thing i can suggest is

"The daystar sinks into the horizon
As the moon soar into the hazy sky"

"the moon soars" instead of "soar" lol

Apart from that, you have such a beautiful poem here! The descriptions were gorgeous creating such vivid imagery..
You should be proud of it!
5/5
*Gem*

It's a great one .... deep feelings ..

good job

Wow.. it a really good mix of sadness and love at the same time.. but I kno you can add a few words.. to make it flow a little better and as wel rhyme.. god job and keep up the work 4/5

Wow this is amazing! really touched my heart. & honestly idk if it should go under "sad" or "love" section cause its both!! lol but overall a wonderful poem!! =o]

To b honest I would say its good n 4/5. U can make it better by adding icing on the cake! :) but its havin a nice flow n i liked reading it. tc

First line fouth staza you wrote here her, it should be her here. You should find another word for dream, it repeats to much, and the flow was just a little off, but other than that it was really really good. the emtion was strong, and the message was clear. i hope this helped, on this well written sad love poem.

This is beautiful...the depth and emotion behind the words are clear to see, the flow is flawless throughout and the imagery you portrayed in this piece was wonderful.
I think this should stay in the love category.

This is beautiful poem excellent Thanks for the comment on "Dreams of Rosepetel"

Such a sad love poem but it was written so beautifully and so filled with love. I understand the pain of losing a love and it's never easy at first, but over time your heart will heel and grow back bigger then ever. Excellent poem 5/5

Wow, seriously, your poems make me cry. :| They seem so full of longing for somebody, missing them so badly. It's a deeply saddening read, yet much enjoyable too. It's genuinely sweet.

An excellently penned piece.

Awww this was very sad but id still keep it where it is.... ur poems are soooooo amazing/wonderful, THE BEST IV EVER READ

I think it was good on love poems although I am so late to tell this but anyway it was so sad as the things you said and she still has another one at her heart
So good at combining the words
Take care,
Laura