by xo kisses xo
Omg! thats so sad!!! i read ur newest poema nd it was beautifula nd it said to read this one and i did...and it is really good. 5/5 |
by Lemonbread
Shit... I can relate... Almost in tears... 5/5 |
by BrokenBrit
I was just wondering if its actully that bad... im sorry to hear that if so |
Every time I read your poems, I wonder if who you are talking about is you, but now I think I am able to tell if it is or not.. Good work on this one, you hit the heart. |
by StormyStar
Wow yet again this is so sad.. |
by Liz
This is intense. I've never had this type of relationship with my mom, but this felt so real. I'm almost certain it is real for you. It's not so much sad...I don't really know how to explain it. But I did like this. Love the feelings and emotions portrayed. Never stop writing. 5/5 |
by C Cattaway
Beautifully written (tho' sad). I hope that as you age, and choose your own family, that you can find the beauty.. for all her faults, you are right, she did make you, and because you are here, we are all able to see your talent.. take that, draw strength from it, and use it wisely. Very well done, on another fantastic write. xx |
Oh my dear god and heaven above...(Not literally) |
Whoops pressed sumbit before I got to finish it: |
Amazing... anger in writing, if only we didn't have to hold it in our hearts in order to transfer our words to the screen... absolutely love it because while i read it i felt what you felt and only amazing writers can transfer emotions to their reader with such intensity, 5/5 |
Wow..Your writing is so amazing...So Powerful, it shows real emotions.. I can relate..And i'm sure you hear enough of that..But i can!! |
Wow..Your writing is so amazing...So Powerful, it shows real emotions.. I can relate..And i'm sure you hear enough of that..But i can!! |
Omg...this is brilliant.. its so sad and shows emotions very very well, great job. |
I can relate. as you well know love it mine could never compare. |