That is amazing. So original. You've created a brilliantly well crafted, twisted tale here. I love it alot.

Amazing, powerful poem.

I love "for i am a blood artist", its really good.
5/5

Great analogy for cutting, i love the realisation and how simple it is once that occurs. this poem is dark and haunting but in a good way that makes it memorable.

The layout of this was very unique but i think it worked really well!
well done =]
if u have time please comment my latest?
much love
Geo
xoxox

Wow that was avery unique poem. If you get a little extra time on your hands take a look at my poems. thx, I'm a beginner so.. yah

Wow i loved this poem it is unique and it sounds so deep
carly

Very powerful poem.. if i could vote any higher than 5 i would.. keep writing

Very powerful poem 5/5

If this is about you, then I am discusted!
YOU
ARE
13!!!
U DONT NO WHAT DEPRESSION IS!!
-_-.......life only gets harder, and you need to stop trying to be older =/
I'm not trying to throw of at u or anything just saying that it is rediculous that u would do such a thing at such a fun stage of life...

down to the poem -
Kinda creepy, but I atcually really was fasinated with it, it really grabbed me,
Nice

WOW! this is.. wow.. thats all i have to say.. like a good wow.. lol

Wow! It's great and I can relate.This poem would make a great song.

This poem is great well written and deep its good you stopped doing that

Awesome poem. u rock. 5/5 u should read some of my stuff.

Cory

Very intense.. well done. xx

Nice work I loved it!! had really nice flow to it

Wow girl =[ this is sad im sorry you felt you needed to do tis but i completely understand i hope you never do this again...

Wow

Umm this is pretty much f**king AWESOME!
� ama

I love it.
In all honesty I was the same way (and still am) but the wall thing I stopped cause I was almost sent away and I wasn't leaving certain things I cherish dearly behind. I understand the pain. Ever need anyone to speak to, I'll always be willing to talk! ^-^

~Ally

P.S- 5/5