You'll Always Be Fake...</3

by TwiztidJuggalette   May 17, 2007


Why can't you love me?
Like I love you
Why do you always lie?
When I always tell it true

Maybe its a guy thing
Or maybe its just you
Why do you treat me like this?
When it only makes me feel blue

Maybe I deserve better
A nice, sweet, caring guy
Someone totally opposite
Someone who won't make me cry

Yes, you say you love me
But let me give it to you straight
You never have loved me
What you've been saying is fake

So now I'm leaving
Putting you in the past
Moving on with my life
Hoping my happiness will last...</3

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The ending was just perfect. It was a powerful message, leave those who don't treat you right. Well done *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    This was really cute.
    I loved the emotion and your flow was beautiful!
    great job!
    5/5
    ((Amber))

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Cute poem.. a bit cliche but still it has a nice flow and it was an ejoyable read

  • 17 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    This is a standard love poem. Although, it is good, it is like a main stream love poem: similar emotions; and, similar actions.

    I can link myself with the poem slightly enough to keep intruiged. The ending of the poem I liked the most.

    Keep on writing, and try to be more original.

    ~Richi~

  • 17 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Wow, loved this poem also, great words, they were simple, but they had great emotion, yeah, I think it's a guy thing, guys are idiots, but we love them anyway, lol, anyway, loved the poem, it was ((amazing))!

    5/5

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