Little Spider

by Bill Turner   May 17, 2007


I feel you clinging to the air
Struggling to stay afloat
Normally I would not care
But this floats my boat

Little spider surfing the sky
Waiting for Miss Muffet
She may just happen by
Listening to some Jimmy Buffet

The pain pills seem to be at work
A little Jack helped kick them in
But the spider it does lurk
Watching me with a grin

Little spider in the breeze
Shuffling feet to the beat
Just doing what you please
In this damn ninety degree heat

It is time to stop with the grin
As the flying monkeys are here
You know that they are going to win
Ask Dorothy, it is them you should fear

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  • 17 years ago

    by m4mm07h

    Very bomb poem! lol i would prefer patron but jack works too. lol umm right here u should change tho.

    "Just doing what you please
    In this damn ninety degree heat"

    instead of "In this damn ninety degree heat"
    u shoulda put
    "Just doing what u please
    in this damn ninety degrees."
    hope u like my little change ::P peace!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Bill,

    Oh where have you gone, Billy Boy, Billy Boy
    Oh where have you gone... Charming Billy

    What kind of drugs were you doing and how much jack did you use to wash them down.

    lol

    Great stuff, dear friend. Nice to see you writing a little humor.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by firexflys

    This is deff original thanks for sure i love how you came up with this and your words were great you used them well keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bill
    Wow must have been some real good pills :) Very creative piece. Great imagery.
    Excellent job!
    Take Care Cindy

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