Wow...this is a fantastic poem/song
i must say the refrain is what i loved the most in this one...

"No longer can I feel the rungs,
The latter's slipping away.
There's water in my lungs,
But I really hope you stay."

it really chills me out...
=)
keep going
*isabel*

Simply...marvelous...

Wow, once again I am speechless...darn you >.< lol. I loved the repetition of the one stanza, it really brought it together. However, speaking of that stanza, by 'latter' did you mean 'ladder'? Lol, because 'ladder' with d's is the one you climb. :]

5.5
<3

All i have to say is omg its wickett keep up the great writing!