I loved the second half of this piece I read the last first sorry. Both were well done I think you showed more of the man's personality in the second that was really well done well I gave you a 5 on the last and a 4 on this one great job Plot121

UGH!
When I read the title
I thought it was going to be like
About cutting
I was like... not again.
Lol.
When I read the first stanza
I was sooo relieved.
He [[don't]] know if he can go on anymore.
It's "doesn't" :]
But all in all.
I have to say
I do believe this is one of your best
Better yet
It IS your best.
This is an original to me.
The flow was kind of off in some parts
But I ignored it because everything else,
It went on flawlessly :]
5/5 dearest :]

Wow... this is amazing! the imagery was amazing, and the flow was perfect. this a totally different subject than what i like, but you made it so good (can't think of a better word than good).
great job!
5/5

"Raw emotions take yet, another life.
Tears flowing down his blood splattered face,"

^^Favourite lines.beautiful lines.....GREAT choice of words n perfectly flowed..n the imagery is just superb!...kp writing!
5/5!!
xxPoojaxx

... that was a very haunting and creepy.. dark poem.

good write. but.. very strong. i dont know what else to say but its truelu dark.

5/5

This was creepy...
i'm afraid =)
really, i loved this...
i <3 dark poems and this was so hauntingly good...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

Wow, this is very deep. but i was very intrested in it.. nice job

:S
very descriptive.
it's very good i love how all of it flows so nice and it tells a story :)

This poem is weird but in a good way, it is strange but also very unique. Imagery is great and idea for whole poem is so original. Interesting rhythm, I like the way you wrote this one. Superb job! It truly deserves 5/5

This is great. I've always adored your poetry. You have been one of my favorite writers on here. This is juswt another one of my favorite poems you have written keep up the great work!