Boys

by Gothic Girl in Pain   May 17, 2007


Boys can be such a pain
They even drive you insane
And yet you have nothing to gain,
except going insane.

Boys have a hard time to show,
who they truly are
Sure some have cool cars
and stuff like that.
But the fact is, how can they care about you,
if you don't really know them?

Boys think girls are complicated,
all I have to say is look who's talking!
We are equal when it come to complications
with each other
But why are boys always such a big bother?

Why is that boys,
have a hard time expressing their emotions?
It's actually quite easy
Just let it all out,
especially your feeling toward someone.
Hell don't keep it in, let it go.
Who cares if the whole world knows?
It just goes to show,
that you give a crap too.

(Well what can I say? I was bored, and felt so ignored. And my ankles really sore. But I hope this weird poem gets to at least someone.)

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  • 17 years ago

    by leinhart

    Heiiii its not easy at it looks!
    well but this is one good poem...

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    I'm the 666 visitor...
    sorry, this has nothing to do with it...
    your poem is really nice...
    reminded me of my day today...
    i sure agree with you...boys can be really complicated...
    but that sure makes a nice poem...
    the rhyme scheme was quite intersting...=)
    i loved the topic...=)
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Cute poem, and i agree with ya that boys can be well...just boys, but like i think what would help the poem is if you felt with the rythming theam all the way through, but still good work

    ---tara

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex

    You spelled quite like quiet..Just to let you know..

    This one didn't rhyme very much.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ayumi

    You should try writing in the way poems look like:
    You:
    Boys can be such a pain. They even drive you insane. And yet you have nothing to gain, except goin' insane.

    Better:
    Boys can be such a pain
    They even drive you insane
    And yet you have nothing to gain,
    except going insane

    Well, it's still a fair job. (4/5)

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