Comments : Boys

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    These are some boys made me laugh 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ayumi

    You should try writing in the way poems look like:
    You:
    Boys can be such a pain. They even drive you insane. And yet you have nothing to gain, except goin' insane.

    Better:
    Boys can be such a pain
    They even drive you insane
    And yet you have nothing to gain,
    except going insane

    Well, it's still a fair job. (4/5)

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex

    You spelled quite like quiet..Just to let you know..

    This one didn't rhyme very much.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Cute poem, and i agree with ya that boys can be well...just boys, but like i think what would help the poem is if you felt with the rythming theam all the way through, but still good work

    ---tara

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    I'm the 666 visitor...
    sorry, this has nothing to do with it...
    your poem is really nice...
    reminded me of my day today...
    i sure agree with you...boys can be really complicated...
    but that sure makes a nice poem...
    the rhyme scheme was quite intersting...=)
    i loved the topic...=)
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by leinhart

    Heiiii its not easy at it looks!
    well but this is one good poem...