by Vanessa May 17, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
A crazed man just chopped up his wife |
Yet again another one of my favorite poems. The structure could have been better but other than that great job. 5/5 |
by Nix
Ending is so powerful and whole piece has greatly created effective atmosphere. You used simple words but you still managed to make excellent picture. Very clear and filed with emotions, unusual really. I don't know where you got idea for it but this is great poem. Well done! |
by Wallace
Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time. |
by Delie
I like how the first one was about his view, then this one is someone watching it all from above. |
Very deep. i enjoyed the reading.. there are a lot of sick people out there.. great poem |