I enjoyed Part 2, more then the first. It was flowing nicely until the last couple of stanzas. But this one was perfect! Nice job.

Quite morbid, the flow was good the description was great all and all a great read so now the perplexing question where are you going to go from here hmmmm Plot121

Wow!!.part 2 was beautiful..very well written compared to part 1...it was soo dark n beautifully penned filled with emotions..
kp up the good wrk!
xxPoojaxx

Nicely done. Creative way to end it. I was almost too nervous to read it. Glad i did.

I loved this stanza,
"Stepping into a hot shower
Renewed his sense of power,
Washing the blood from his skin,
But not removing the bloodstain within."

well written. =]

Even more creepy...
i'm beginning to <3 your poems...
you have a talent for dark writing...
this was really a nice one...
=) =)
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

Very deep. i enjoyed the reading.. there are a lot of sick people out there.. great poem

I like how the first one was about his view, then this one is someone watching it all from above.
great, and well done.
it is disturbing tho with the part about the poeces of her body and put in different places. but the whole poem is great :)
and actually i don't mind the gore.

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Ending is so powerful and whole piece has greatly created effective atmosphere. You used simple words but you still managed to make excellent picture. Very clear and filed with emotions, unusual really. I don't know where you got idea for it but this is great poem. Well done!

Yet again another one of my favorite poems. The structure could have been better but other than that great job. 5/5