Comments : Outside

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Well Done.
    The flow was perfect, the wording great. I loved the imagery you used. It was just overall a wonderful read.
    I absolutley loved your piece.
    Well penned,
    Elainex

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Its a nice piece. Nature lovers has such beautiful thoughts n u r one of them. from my side its 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by KAP DAR

    Very playful light and fun! i enjoyed (: 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jess

    Just reading this poem made me smile, I love the imagery.
    Brilliant words and a great flow, a very fun read! 5/5