Awesome I love IT!!!!!!
GOOD JOB I WANT YOU TO WRITE MORE!!!!

This is a good one keep up the great work thanks for the comment

Wow, this was so full of emotion. great job...*shudders* wow.

alissa

THis is a good one! well done! the emotions was raw! flow was good keep writing! and uhm. Just edit your poem to remove the weird letters :P

I liked this one i found the emotions to be deep and dark which was great to read. Just need to fix those little letter things thatpop up i know you will know what i mean. other then that well done on this nicely written poem~mel