Sun to Moon

by Lost Soul 691   May 18, 2007


Vivid oranges and reds
slowly dipping
across the sky
disappearing

in that sphere
see me
deep within the swimming colors
my heart

delicate hues
trailing to the walls
outreaching
bleeding

replaced by time
with the coldest white
smooth and solid
but still burning bright

this orb
it pulls the tides
in the sea
in me

hold it in your hands
and dream by it

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is beautiful to the point of haunting. I love the imagery and every stanza is flawless. I absolutely love the ending. One of the best poems I've read in awhile!

    Take care,

    GaryJ

  • 17 years ago

    by Bogie

    I love how the first stanza took me
    like right on the beach at sunset.
    Building me up emotionally and
    visually to the fourth stanza and
    I must say it blew me away with
    that last line, but still burning bright.
    An excellent read indeed thank
    you for sharing and write on,
    Bogie

  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    "this orb it pulls the tides
    in the sea in me" I like the story
    this draws readers attention. Thanks for commenting. I'll pay you the same courtesy.

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