by Lets Keep it A Surprise
I liked this poem alot. It shows how humanity is so diverse, how even ants can work together more peacefully then us with minds and wills. |
by Brittany C
Great poem. I really liked it because it described how ants work togeather perfectly. |
by Zeus
OMG I LOVED IT!!! This is a great poem. I loved it greatly. Keep up the work. I loved how you compared it to Communism. Great Work! |
Good poem but it could have been a bit better had you had fleshed out the whole lonely ant idea and added some more descriptions or a poetic something to make the lines stand out. |
by Robert
This was a very well done poem I enjoy it from first word to the last The aunts would be proud kudos. Plot121 |
Great work...amazing..just beautiful..i loved the way u've clearly desribed the ant work..lol...the message is soo true..more should think like u do...lol...good wrk=) |
by Michelle18
Wow..i've never seen anyone write a poem about an ant... lol.. im impressed... |
by nikki
Wow. i thought you did such a great job on this, i never thought of an ant like that, i just thought of them as annoying crawlers. but the way you described them was great nice work, 5/5 |
Ah! An excellent tribute to the ants! I look at those creatures in amazement. This is a lovely write, fluid, unique, smart. A pleasure to read. |