Ouch,
looooooooooooool
reading it once i got the whole thing, i like the last stanza though, it is the best,lol.
after reading it all i have to say is
YOU ARE VERY CREATIVE, you know what you write about.

Awww... i loved how you used the Shona, that just took the poem to a whole new element. a great poem. you are so inspiring goran, you keep me writing! i loved the poem, it touched my heart just like everything of yours does.

5/5 like i give you every time, it'll never be different :).

Very well done with this poem.
You once again did a great job!
Never seem to dissapoint me with
your poems. The flow was very
beautiful, and you had a lovely
story and dedication to this poem.
Well done. Check out my latest poems.
It's been a while for you.
God bless 5/5
<3Tay(^_^)

Aww this is such a beautiful peice. At first i thought you were using 'Shona' as a name, but i never knew it could have such a nice meaning. Well done! 5/5 Xx Chrissie

Beautifully penned short poem you have written here i found it to be quite amazing and lovely. Well done yet again on a superb piece of poetry, Goran. 5/5 must deserved~mel

Beautiful poem...Beautiful beutiful work!!short yet so well penned n the usage of the word "Shona" in a different way gave poem it's beauty charm...great work!
Kp writing!5/5!

xxPoojaxx

Hey,
you write the most beautiful love poems =)
this one is kind of cute and short, its easy to read and I like the title of your poem. keep up the good work! 5/5
kisses stephanie

Very cute. I really liked it. It was a bit short but you made it work. 5/5

Aww how amazing is this! It may be short but you said everything you could with it. If u know what i meen:) Very beautiful poem! Love the way it is. 5/5

Beautiful poem. Unique and heartfelt.

5/5

[tragic]

O thats cute ... i thought that shona was a girl but anyways thats nice and sweet 5/5

Ah i'm bengali too! lol anyway, that poem was soooo cute. she's a lucky girl to have that written about her =]

Wow that was diffrent, in a good way of course. I liked this one. The flow was flawless, the word choice perfect, and the emtion clear. good job, keep up the good work. 5/5

Wow I loved it. It was truly great.
I wish i could write like that.

Very nice, i love it.. awesome job

"Dear Shona
From the evening I saw you
Like a movie theme.
Since then,
you became an actress in my every dream."

It's been a while since i heard from you, so i want to say thank you for the comment =)

Now on to the poem. The final stanza which i highlighted above was the prefct ending and the stanza which hit me the most.
I love the comparison to acting and films to love.
And thank you for explaining 'Shona', i was thinking it was her name, lol
Bravo on this
5/5
*Gem*

Ahh. i absolutely loved the words to this. it was like music. so sweet and tender. thank you for the commmentttt. mmm..im like at peace right now, after reading this.

major 5/5

<3 Kitty.

Oh, and i want to say i'm adding this to my fave poems!

Awww
that was so sweet
very good job
you have great talent
and know just the right words to say
very good
love from
kaila
5/5

'Dear Shona
From the evening I saw you
Like a movie theme.
Since then,
you became an actress in my every dream."

With that stanza, you managed to make the butterflies in my tummy flutter...
There's always something in your poems, a substance which invariably induce me into a state of bliss and delight...I wonder how you do it... Additional props for the simplicity in beauty and style...wonderful as always... take care, Debbie