I really like this poem. To me this shows strength....a deeper beauty within. Strength to carry on day by day with a smile on your face even though you're broken up inside and a deep beauty from within to still spread that smile and joy to others. Great job!!

Hey im new here and your poem is one of the first ones i read. i really like it because it sounds exactly like me... im glad im not the only one out there who does that. keep it up i really like this poem.

"Torment taking over her soul
Yet it never shows
Filled with woe and confusion
And yet nobody knows "

Such a sad ending.. from experience i know what bottling up feelings can do to a persons mind..
You've portrayed that so well
5/5
*Gem*