Very good..i lvoed the flow also it was just such a cute poem.it painted this beautiful picture in my mind |
by Domino0792
I really enjoyed this peom, mainly because it has a beautiful flow to it..... an interesting read and I look forward to reading more poems from you! |
by HD
Your poem is beautiful. |
by manda
Wonderful poem it is really sweet.... |
by manda
Wonderful poem it is really sweet.... |
by Alma
Wow. that was a beautiful piece of poetry. it's a sad end though. loved it 5/5 |
by Emma
Love this. 5/5 |
by Taylor
I've only read good poetry tonight and this is no exception. |
by nering
Your word choice came over me so powerful...this is an emotional fantastic poem...Im sorry for u and the girl for you two not together...u can feel ur feelings in this. I hope she read it. But like im told it is all for the best--if it is meant to be it will be someday. Beautifuly written--cant wait to hear more recent ones |
by Richard Alan
This was really good, it really sounds like you write directly from the heart... not dressing up anything too much, and that's admirable! 5/5 Keep writing and your freed desires will help fulfill your dreams! |
by Alexis
Beautiful. |
Really really really sweet poem amazing cmb thanks! |
by Grace
Sweet poem dude LOL =) |
That was a really sweet poem. Keep up the work. |
That is beautiful! TWO THUMBS UP!!!!!! |