I loved this poem, it made me feel like it really happened to me (it hasn't) where did you get the inspirtation for this poem?
Anyway, keep it up!
(:Katie:)

WOW this is simply amazing! I can relate to this one.. because I'm always the heartbroken in my past relationships.. anyway Flow was good! well done! I like the title of this poem! good job! 5/5!

Another great write!! I know exactly how you feel. Mine was barricaded behind stone walls surrounded by a mine field....It took alot for me to allow my heart to open up again and I'm glad I did. Keep up the great writes....you're becoming one of my favorites.

Nice wording with a rhythmic flow. I think I have to say that the last stanza was my favorite, but I'm not quite sure why, sorry. I think it's good that your poems aren't too long. Sometimes short poems are the better.

Brad