Looking Forward

by ECILA ice   May 18, 2007


I gaze outside my window
Astonished by the golden hands of the sun
Wish I could feel the warm it brings
From underneath my pale flesh,
Hope its ray could reach me
To a place where I am now,
Or embrace me, protect me
From shadows and darkness;
But it seems to be out of reach,
Too far to even notice me
But I'm still waiting on this corner
I'm waiting for another day to come
Hoping that tomorrow will be different,
Different 'coz finally I was seen by the sun...

** I'm just looking forward for the day that my problems will be solved , i won't be lonely anymore and mostly my secret love would like me too..just hoping

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  • 16 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    There is a great feeling of morose here. Its sad, as if there is no ending. The structure is kinda lacking. Its kinda soft, like it needs a bit more strength.
    {4/5}
    [PygmyPuff]

  • 17 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    The image portrayed in this poem was deep and I liked it that way. But again, I'm expecting more than just this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Olivia

    Thanks so much for the comments. :]]
    It's always really great to see what people
    think.

    This poem is really nice! I like it a lot. And I think it is strange but kind of cool how you put what it means...as to help the reader further understand. I've never thought of doing that.
    5/5 definitely. :]
    Rate/ Comment some of my other poems if you have the time...perhaps some of my newest.
    Thanks again! :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex

    I like it.

    Hope one day your problems are solved too. Bless you.

    ~*Alex*~

  • 17 years ago

    by sian

    I really like this, simple and sweet.

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