I really like this, simple and sweet.

I like it.

Hope one day your problems are solved too. Bless you.

~*Alex*~

Thanks so much for the comments. :]]
It's always really great to see what people
think.

This poem is really nice! I like it a lot. And I think it is strange but kind of cool how you put what it means...as to help the reader further understand. I've never thought of doing that.
5/5 definitely. :]
Rate/ Comment some of my other poems if you have the time...perhaps some of my newest.
Thanks again! :]

The image portrayed in this poem was deep and I liked it that way. But again, I'm expecting more than just this.

There is a great feeling of morose here. Its sad, as if there is no ending. The structure is kinda lacking. Its kinda soft, like it needs a bit more strength.
{4/5}
[PygmyPuff]