Comments : Blue Sky

  • 17 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    Good job girl i really like this poem...

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    OMG...that was beautiful.. loved the ending,everything...

    a very good write..keep it up

    great job :D 5/5

    ~Wake~

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess

    I like it its realli cute =]] 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!
    Very cute poem..love the ending n it was a beautifully penned write!
    Good job!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "You give me a smile
    Before your face fades away
    And im just left with a
    Blank blue sky"

    This was such a beautiful and poignant write.
    It seems the things we truly love, just slowly over time, begin to fade away. Great write :)

    Take Care.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Beautiful piece of writing.
    Really enjoyed reading it.
    Take care