I like this one it is very true. Most guys do act totally diffrent when they are around their friends they have to act all tough for them but the \n when its just you and him he is the most sweetest caring guy you've ver see.

overall I liked this poem alot.

~*~Keri~Ann Nicole~*~

Every page with a different stoy

you need to fix the spelling jo jo. story, and i hope no one is nastey to you. i will hur them, just tell me who they are, and off will go david, on a mission. :@ angry face,

well done tho. excellent poem. 5/5 David

Umm...
The first stanza was kind of weird.
When you're really happy.
You don't usually go outside and watch the sky.
then out comes the big baddy, you
"You" kind of ruined the flow.
baddy? What's a baddy?
This whole poem was pretty random.
I found it to be just... well, weird.
Lol.
Just for that, I give you a 4/5.

This is great ^^
i really like it