"I know sometimes i cry,
because compared to living, it seems so easy to die,
but somehow i will find a way to be strong,
instead of being quiet, everyone will hear my song."

Everybody has an inner strength inside of them that they can use when things get hard. If you want something in life, you had better make some noise. Great poem!

Take Care.

Oh gee, wat to say bout this poem, it had a deeper meaning that i latched onto, it was full on. the effects of the words were very emotive and the way the poem was set out was fantastic.

well done. 5/5 David

A great poem on inner strength. perfect except some of the rhymes seemed a little forced, the word choice other than that was excellent, and the emtion was wonderful. wellpenned well written, excellent job. 5/5

Briant write, great flow and volcabulary was excellent , i loved it ,great poem: I know sometimes i cry,
because compared to living, it seems so easy to die,
but somehow i will find a way to be strong,
instead of being quiet, everyone will hear my song. keep it up ~5/5~ your friend Tracy

I really liked this one. It has a very nice flow and wonderful word choice. I gave in a 5/5.

I liked the repetition in the first line of your stanzas they really came across well. It strongly boosted the flow of your poem.

xxx alex xxx

I liked this a lot. 5/5 -T. Jane

Greatly written piece. I like second stanza the most. It shoves emotions very well, 5/5.