My life story

by Brittiny   May 18, 2007


It feels so good to look at the floor
and see it all covered in red
as i sit in my head, all i hear is more
my mom comes and sends me to bed
as she again grabs the mop and bucket
i don't need a life with pain and fear
as i grab my friend, i say to myself f**k it
ooh how i wish death was near
with my last breath i look out my window
everybody goes on as they have always gone
my body will become a widow
I'm so sorry but I'm finally done!!

this poem was inspired by my friend

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Very good rhyming and beautiful written.
    Loved reading it.
    Take care

  • 17 years ago

    by lizzle

    Its a great poem!i can relate to it in many ways!wel written!5/5
    -lisa 8)

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