Slipping away- baby dont let go...

by V dog   May 18, 2007


Its all slipping away.
The laces are coming undone.
Your holding on,
but your fingers have gone numb.

Baby dont let go

I look at you and see your eyes filled with pain...
Why cant i just take it all away?
Lean on me, let me carry you,
just like you have for the very little time I've known you.

Baby dont let go

Your so strong, dont give up on me now.
Prove them wrong,
show them what you can do
Because i know the heart thats inside of you...

Baby hold on to me

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  • 17 years ago

    by LossxOfxControl

    I'm so glad that you helped him, the poem is really nice and flowing too, thanks for the comment on mine.

    Good luck with stuff =]

  • 17 years ago

    by lisa

    Wow i see why u wrote me a comment you sort of went through the same thing atleast you could help him tho!gud on you!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by V dog

    Im way new at this so this poem was just in my note book so i put it in and i dont know how to really explain this poem so i guess im just writing a comment to my self haha. this is about one of my friends. he came to my work and asked me to come out side, he had something to say. so i did and he ended up telling me he was saying goodbye...it suprised me so i asked him where he was going and he just said away for a while and i wouldnt see him for a while...then it hit me...he was going to kill himself....luckily i got him not to. I wish he knew how much people love him.

    I love you big guy!
    Love- v dog

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