Yeh, sad but true. In some parts it seemed kinda choppy, but in all it was cool. Nicely done. Maybe you could check out my poem "I must be fake" sometime.
Lovely poem, thanks for sharing.

I hate stereotypes...
but i love your poem... :)
it reminded me of some of my own...
it's really a nice one...=)
5/5
keep going
*isabel*