Anna's Murder

by TwiztidJuggalette   May 18, 2007


As I await for you to come
In your closet I hide
Getting impatient
With my knife at my side

After awhile,
I can hear you with your key
You come into the house
Now you get to see,

See all the anger and pain
You have put me through
Tonight I will get my revenge
And you'll be dead too

I sneak out of the closet
And creep down the stairs
Go into the living room
When all you do is stare

"You know why I'm here Anna
And you should know your not leaving alive,
All this anger has come from you
How can you honestly survive?"

"Paige your crazy,
You wouldn't do this,
People will look for me
And you'll be in deep shit."

God how I love it
How you beg for your life
Makes me feel so powerful
But now its time for the knife

"Please don't! I'm so sorry" you scream
With tears coming from your eyes
"Just shut the fu<k up b*t*h,
I'm tired of your fu<king lies."

I stab you seven times
And the bloods rushing out
Now I know for sure
You will die without a doubt

As you take your final breath
You say you're final words
"Paige I'm so sorry
I gues your screams I never heard"

Now I'm overjoyed,
Beacuse your murder was fun
But just because your dead
Doesn't mean I'm done....<3

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bre Monique

    Whoa. I like it, it's different. And the last line made me wonder if there would be a part two...

  • 17 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    You have such powerful flow of words... The description and intensity expressed in this poem is amazing...

    The last stanza just made me go 'whoa!'
    It's funny in a sadistic kind of way... Great poem! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Woa this is a creepy intense poem! but a beautiful write!

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Hm, well, wow. That was kind of creepy. I liked it, although I would have preferred if it wasn't so... blunt?:

    "I stabbed you seven times..." -- I would have liked it better if you described this in a different way. It's just so... cliche? If you put more description into it, I would have liked it better.

    Overall, it was a good try.

  • Holy s**t that was messed up but made me want more