Ok you got my attention with the hook then youdid nothing with it never spun astory never made me aquire any real information so why write something that so hollow of any thing? Plot121

Very nice.. like this one alot 5/5

Wow, I really liked this poem, I think the topic was awesome, and how you showed the message, I really liked it :D

The message was clear, but the poem itself was random, it seemed you were all over that place, but the word choice was great, descrptive words, the emtion was dry, because, the poem, and the message din't quite fit, but all togather not bad, not one of your best but not bad. I hope I wasn't too harsh.

This ... it seemed to be off the point.. it went from the sun to the dragon to different places lol.. I love your theme.. but it not catching people eyes.. and you have mentioned bright.. twice.. so try to delete bright and see how it sounds

Wow!!!=)
The message was clearly portrayed. beautiful..good vocab used though use of simpler ones could hv increased the effect....this poem ..like all your othrs...has it's own strong message penned...Good work!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Great use of vocabulary. I love how you use such deep metaphoric phrases such But once the dragon is slain
and the villages are finally safe
others finally realize that
True love cannot be stopped.
Very classy.

{5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

Now the emotion in this poem was good and better then some of your other ones but the flow was a tad off only in some spots but that's easily fixed with some adjustments just read it over nice work

That is the love between
to young forbidden lovers.
Forced to hide their love
from all others afraid of change.

all poem was so good but i like that stanza mostly gr8 work 5/5

Very different. but definantly not a bad different.
it kind of jumped around a little bit. but, nothing horrible.

i like it! =)

Wow great piece . Love the flow and the wordings plus the content. 5/5 frm me

I really like this one. i thought that it was well written. great job

Makes me think of romeo and juliet :)
well written.
it's really good and i think that the whole rhyme shceme is real good. :)

It was a really good poem = ] and yeah i am not a huge fan of love poetry but this one was unique... different then the love poems that i do not like to read.. very original anyways i give it a 5/5

It was different but still great. i gave you a 4/5 for this one. you started of with a story but in the end it went no where sort of thing. but still great poem.