by Brittany C May 18, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I sit here thinking |
by sexyCheckers
Love this;; |
by Kaila
This poem was kind of cliche although I think it's cute you have a new love try to be more expressive with your work it always helps to find synnanyms for me |
I really like this poem.. very energentic and and yet it has a flow.. good job.. there isn't realy anything to change about this poem.. becasue its already good.. so keep up the good work !! 5/5 |
by Vanessa
Definalty heartfelt, but the flow is off, and the are some errors, but other than that It was well wriiten, the emtion was strong, and the word choice was simple. job well done |
Awww...very cute poem...u've expressed passion thru this one...i loved the way u expressed all your thoughts without caring what other's thought...very sweet..kp it up! |