Flow was bit nknocked off by some lack of letters in a word or a word all together but the description was nice the message was sweet. You may want to read this over a couple of time before subitting your work to publication Plot121

Awww this is very sweet one! Just that your writing out everything you feeling about this person and don't mind the ryhme because this is your poem and it meens the most to you. A beautiful write! i love it :)
5/5

I really liked this poem i found it to be quite sweet and held alot of strong emotions. I enjoyed reading this but one thing that through me off in the first stanza is the flow kind of went off because you used the word "me" twice it just didnt sound right having it at the end of the 2nd and 4th line, I think if you changed that it would flow better. Other then that i liked this poem alot and think you did a great job with it. Well done~mel

This poem i feel was kinda forced, but overall very nice 4/5

Its really deep and was a nice read. It was also very sweet. 5/5

Awww...very cute poem...u've expressed passion thru this one...i loved the way u expressed all your thoughts without caring what other's thought...very sweet..kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Definalty heartfelt, but the flow is off, and the are some errors, but other than that It was well wriiten, the emtion was strong, and the word choice was simple. job well done

I really like this poem.. very energentic and and yet it has a flow.. good job.. there isn't realy anything to change about this poem.. becasue its already good.. so keep up the good work !! 5/5

This poem was kind of cliche although I think it's cute you have a new love try to be more expressive with your work it always helps to find synnanyms for me

Love this;;
I can totally relate about thinking about one person, and it sorta drives me crazy sometimes but I love thinking about him cos it makes me smile just imagining him!!! :]
5/5