Its you

by brianna   May 18, 2007


Here I sit,
dreaming all the day.
Knowing it's none but your love,
that blows me away.

The feeling your touch brings,
is so soft, and so sweet.
My mind just goes blank ,
it makes my knees weak.

When wrapped in your arms,
I know I feel free.
I know that it's your love,
that makes me believe in me.

With these sweet dreams,
you will never believe.
How faithful to you I am,
it's only you and me.

Holding on tight,
because I believe you are mine.
Does this sound too corny?
Because I didn't intend to rhyme.

So here I sit,
dreaming all the day.
Knowing its none but your love,
that blows me away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    Well order in its meter and movement. quite good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Whether its theme is hackneyed or not, this certainly was a gorgeous love poem. How you've written this in such an expressive manner emanated your emotions within. It's so sweet! Nicely done. ~Marian

  • 17 years ago

    by Darlena

    AWW iTSz REALLY A NiCE P0EM. KEEP UP THE GREAT W0RK !!

    5/5.

    FEEL FREE T0 CUM & CHECK 0UT MY P0EMS. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww Brianna
    I really like this poem
    you did an excellent job
    flow was good
    same with the rhyming
    nice work
    5/5
    love always
    kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww Brianna
    this is so cute!!
    I loved it!!
    you did a fantastic job!!
    The imagery was wonderful
    very great love poem I must say

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