Fly away

by Valiantpenguin   May 18, 2007


These suicidal thought
crowd in my mind
i can see that you are leaving
with all your memories behind
you don't know how i feel
when i see you hold her tight
but i keep to myself
and lose to temptation with a fight
i want to fly away from all these tears
crawl away from all my fears
but i cant let go
of everything i have built
so I'll live my life
torture filled

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  • 17 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    This poem touched my heart. I knwo ow this feels..i am feeling it right now as a matter a fact. it is hard to watch him hold her. and i have wanted to kill myself so many times. But im to afraid to.
    Great job
    but as a suggestion
    maybe change the anme to torture filled...
    idk i thought it might be a better title for it...doesn't matter just a suggestion

    if you get the chance...r/r/c my poems too

    5/5
    Love
    ~Shannon~

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