This poem touched my heart. I knwo ow this feels..i am feeling it right now as a matter a fact. it is hard to watch him hold her. and i have wanted to kill myself so many times. But im to afraid to.
Great job
but as a suggestion
maybe change the anme to torture filled...
idk i thought it might be a better title for it...doesn't matter just a suggestion

if you get the chance...r/r/c my poems too

5/5
Love
~Shannon~