Good poem, i really liked it. keep it up

I know it's not meant to be humourous, but I kinda found it funny. Great job though!!!!! 5/5

Josie

That was rlly good!!... i enjoyed reading it, and the part with his gf dying came suddenly... great emotion.. 5/5 from me, and thanks so much for the comment.. it means a lot

Great poem.I loved how you repeated the line "Mister nice guy".I also liked the ending very dramatic and a great way to end this poem.A definate(sp?) 5/5 from me.
Keep up the great work,
Miranda