Drown Me

by TheRevelation   May 18, 2007


As water falls down
I remember all the words you said
Saying it was better this way,
My tears feel as heavy as lead,

You used to say I love you,
Now I drown you in my tears,
Going deeper into the dark blue,
Me by your side never leaving,

The hard earth gets softer from the wet,
But no rain falls only me sitting here,
I read your name fresh tears spurt,
That night I never got over my fear,

You used to say I love you,
One tear always slides down my face,
Going deeper into the dark blue,
Always by your side never leaving you.

*this poem is supposed to be confusing to sum this up is saying that a girl is crying on her lovers grave and will never leave because she is in such a deep pit of despair*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    //* Wonderful poem. Shows so much deep emotion. Flow was good too. I understood most of it but I didn't get the grave part.

    Sometimes it's nice to make a poem kind of confusing to make the reader think but most people make it so confusing the reader gets turned off. But this was not the case and I see the potential of you being a great writer. I'm young myself but I know a great writer when I see one.

    Keep it up && you'll go far. Take Care,,*

    -Shannon

  • 17 years ago

    by Darlena

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