0O0H. L0L. i GET THE P0EM N0W ! i L0VE iT. iT`S iN-DEPTH && PRECiSE. i L0VE iT. iT`S BEAUTiFUL. 5/5.

CAN U PLEASE CHECK 0UT MY P0EMS WHEN U GET THE CHANCE. THANX.

//* Wonderful poem. Shows so much deep emotion. Flow was good too. I understood most of it but I didn't get the grave part.

Sometimes it's nice to make a poem kind of confusing to make the reader think but most people make it so confusing the reader gets turned off. But this was not the case and I see the potential of you being a great writer. I'm young myself but I know a great writer when I see one.

Keep it up && you'll go far. Take Care,,*

-Shannon