Kiss In the Rain

[hey before yall start to read, can yall please tell me what yall think about my poem, and leave me comments please.. i would really like that if you told me..

I saw you for the first time
and right away I knew you were mine
I would always want to talk
but faster you seemed to walk
I told my friend I liked you
but she liked you too
she didn't understand once
and of course she wouldn't understand twice
I was the jealous type and so was she
she always wondered why I was mad,
she soon found out,
The reason was because I LOVED HIM
I told him I love you
and he said it back
my friend was mad, but she knew he was mine
since the first time i saw him
Out in the cold rain
we were together by our selfs
the harder it rained, the more he hugged me
I soon found out he did love me
he gave me a kiss, one that I wouldn't forget
which was the kiss in the rain