Rex : Thank you for your comment on Tempest, especially in regards to the "JUMP NOW". When I read the poem aloud, it is with force and angry tone ... I've startled myself as to where this "voice" has come from. I tried reading it toned down but I can't. I'm very open to alternate words in this section, so please feel free to advise if you have a suggestion.

Very poetic, this poem was written good.