by lizzle May 18, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I can see that she weeps |
by Raychil
This poem is very deep and emotional, I liked the story line and the feeling you put into it. But maybe if you just watch your line breaks alittle more and watch your spelling. But I can tell your a great poet, just keep writing. Wonderful job! |
by Tara
Amazing and beautifully sad |