Unfinished/Untitle

by Erick   May 19, 2007


Please comment this and let me know what you think...
Any suggestion on what i should title it, let me know.
means alot...

Why do I like you?

Your the bestest friend,
I've ever had.
You know the most about me,
the one i go to when im sad.

Why did i have to fall for you?

You've been there since day one,
You never run when i need you the most.
And I appreciate that the most
All my so call "friends" always run and get lost.

Why did it have to be you?

The person that I cant have in this world,
Is the one that I want the most.
Everytime we fight,
Its when im truly lost.

Why do I have to feel this way?

I think your amazing
And i would change nothing about you.
I would do the most,
To be with you and be a part of you.

What I would I do for you?

I would cry for you your tears,
And die for you a thausand times a day.
It may be painful
But i would do anything to take your pain away.

Did you know?

That I lay in bed
Dreaming of you
Dream of places far and near
But with one wish of you being near.

I got one question....

Why do I think is so wrong
If it feels so right.
All I ask is to be with you
And let me hold you tight.

If you were mine....

Never again
would you feel pain.
I would trat you like no other
And never give you pain.

I know....

That you been
hurt in the past.
So have I
but I promist i could make this last.

Friends Forever...

Is what we'll always be,
Its what i promised from the start..
I would never leave you
And thats coming from my heart.

So if what i feel.........

Never works out
Dont be afraid on the outcomes.
Because forever friendship pact,
Never be-parts.

I never really told you....

I think your the best,
Thank you for being the best.
I love you as a friend
And your the best.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Interestingly Captivating! I loved the form you used. Amazing, the feelings where strongly there, the flow was perfect.
    Keep it up,
    Elainex