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by Rami May 19, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / lost relationships
You let me fall. Did you care? Any at all? You cut my rope, and pushed me down. Diving below Breaking the ground. I trusted you. To hold on tight. You said to climb up. That you would stay all night. But when I believed, That you were going to stay, You told me it wasn't enough. And decided to throw me away. So I lay on a couch, Barely alive, Laying face down While a friend pulls out knives. Like the knife you used, To cut my rope. You were supposed to save me. Supposed to be my hope. Even though you let me fall, I would go again, Just so i could tell you I will love you until my end. I couldn't help Falling in love, but before I crash heres a message, Hey fox, Thanks for the shove.
by Taylor
Really well written. keep up the good work:) 5/5
by Sasha
Nicley written
by Finalgravedigger
I know what you mean I can relate more than well, its hard, description, transition and words were great 5/5 maybe u can read oneo f mine.