Nice.. i like the first stanza

I love it, reminded me of a few ppl in my life

Too true! I wish people would stop trying to impress others! 5 out of 5 because I have special passions about things, and this is one!

Very well written, like the rest of your poems. I love your work, you write about things that are sssooo true and this is one of them. People just try to hard. Keep it up! 5/5

This was interesting i liked it alot i found the emotion to be deep and strong. Well done on this nicely written poem with a great ryhme scheme. ~mel

Lovely poem hun.
it's the truth, unfortunately.
5/5.

and thank you for reading my poem even though you are against that sort of thing. i'm against it too, but there are just some things people can't help. I'm sure anyone else that shared your opinion would have been rather fast to be judgemental. anyway, thank you love.

Everything u said was soo true people these days lose them selfs in lies and shit like cus i no once in while i catch my self like dat, but i looved ur peom

Sweet!! good work, 5/5. :)

You're right, the world's full with that kind of people. Well written poem.

I really like this one. It does really describe how people really are... always so fake.

Hey thats really good.. I get what ya mean! I hate ppl like that!

This is incredibly well done. The rhyming scheme was a little off but I definitely think this was an excellent poem. I can tell you were really feeling what you wrote. Great job! 5/5